posted by [identity profile] airie-fairy.livejournal.com at 09:42am on 22/04/2008
The Three/Jo one is adorable! XD I especially love the first sentence. I can imagine a very hard-hitting sensation of not knowing what to do with yourself. And is it odd that that seems very much the kind of scenario those two would find themselves in?

The Four/Master one is beautiful. You especially got Four's voice really, really well. And the last sentence is spellbinding. Wow.
 
posted by [identity profile] stunt-muppet.livejournal.com at 08:52pm on 22/04/2008
Oh, I'm so glad that Four's voice sounded okay - this is the first time I've written him at all, and I was quite worried that he'd sound off.

And is it odd that that seems very much the kind of scenario those two would find themselves in?

I hope it doesn't seem too odd, because I can imagine them getting into something like this very easily, what with all that exploring they do. XD

Thank you for commenting!

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