posted by [identity profile] stunt-muppet.livejournal.com at 07:06pm on 26/02/2007
Thank you for that very thorough review! And you have no idea how flattered I am that you'd recommend this. :)

I personally love it when a character falls asleep on another character's shoulder, so I know what you mean. To shamelessly "borrow" your phrase, it's very high on my Checklist of Cute.

I'm glad you like the last line. That took a couple of tries to get right.

Feel free to put this up in your journal as it now appears; I'm probably going to leave this mostly as is, since I like this better than I thought I would. Rewrites will probably be quite minor, like a switched word or an adjusted comma.

Thanks again, and I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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