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stunt_muppet) wrote2019-10-06 07:50 pm
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Sunday Six, 10/6
I had a whole section that I was inspired to write but by the time I'd finished the scene the dialogue I was first inspired to write no longer fit with the tone of the scene. I was very sad about it.
"I - I can, but - " he steadies himself, wills his mind to focus. "Allura, hearing you talk about me like that - asking Shiro instead of me, like I'm not there - "
"Oh!" She stops moving abruptly which is the exact opposite of what he wanted. "I'm so sorry, I was just - I was only teasing, I hadn't even thought it would sound like that - "
"Allura," he interrupts her, his voice thin with need. "Allura, I love it."
"...oh." Its a very different oh this time.
"I - I can, but - " he steadies himself, wills his mind to focus. "Allura, hearing you talk about me like that - asking Shiro instead of me, like I'm not there - "
"Oh!" She stops moving abruptly which is the exact opposite of what he wanted. "I'm so sorry, I was just - I was only teasing, I hadn't even thought it would sound like that - "
"Allura," he interrupts her, his voice thin with need. "Allura, I love it."
"...oh." Its a very different oh this time.
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Ugh, no wonder! I hate it when that happens. Sympathy!
Posting a thousand years later as always. >___>
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