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stunt_muppet ([personal profile] stunt_muppet) wrote2019-10-06 07:50 pm

Sunday Six, 10/6

I had a whole section that I was inspired to write but by the time I'd finished the scene the dialogue I was first inspired to write no longer fit with the tone of the scene. I was very sad about it.




"I - I can, but - " he steadies himself, wills his mind to focus. "Allura, hearing you talk about me like that - asking Shiro instead of me, like I'm not there - "

"Oh!" She stops moving abruptly which is the exact opposite of what he wanted. "I'm so sorry, I was just - I was only teasing, I hadn't even thought it would sound like that - "

"Allura," he interrupts her, his voice thin with need. "Allura, I love it."

"...oh." Its a very different oh this time.
 
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[personal profile] enemyofperfect 2019-10-07 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
OMG, I love this. :D It would have been great if it really was Lance needing to ask for a change and Allura being wonderfully considerate, but what it is instead is so delicious! I love the tiny little twist to it.

I had a whole section that I was inspired to write but by the time I'd finished the scene the dialogue I was first inspired to write no longer fit with the tone of the scene. I was very sad about it.

Ugh, no wonder! I hate it when that happens. Sympathy!