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posted by [personal profile] enemyofperfect at 03:25am on 03/09/2019
Aah, what an intriguing snippet! Lance's guilt while still watching feels so him, and I love this glimpse of the dynamic between Allura and Shiro. She's so strong and elegant at the same time! ♥
Edited (stray punctuation) Date: 2019-09-03 03:26 am (UTC)
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posted by [personal profile] stunt_muppet at 02:13am on 05/09/2019
Aaaah I am so delighted to be able to show this stuff to you! A bunch of the Sunday snippets I've been doing have been from this fic and every week I closer to actually finishing something for the first time in ages!

(Also I'm glad that Lance sounds in character because he isn't *the* hardest out of the group to pin down voice-wise but I still feel like I'm working on it.)
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posted by [personal profile] enemyofperfect at 02:49am on 05/09/2019
Congratulations on making progress towards finishing something! It's such a great feeling, and I know what it's like to go a long time without getting to experience it, so I'm really cheering for you!

You know, for some reason I was imagining that Lance's voice came naturally to you! Not just because he's your point of view character here; maybe because you do such a good job of showing a more complex thought process than he sometimes shows, but in a way that enriches his canon characterization instead of contradicting it?
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