Congratulations on making progress towards finishing something! It's such a great feeling, and I know what it's like to go a long time without getting to experience it, so I'm really cheering for you!

You know, for some reason I was imagining that Lance's voice came naturally to you! Not just because he's your point of view character here; maybe because you do such a good job of showing a more complex thought process than he sometimes shows, but in a way that enriches his canon characterization instead of contradicting it?