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posted by [identity profile] left-eye-better.livejournal.com at 09:17am on 04/12/2010
Wow, I have to say I love the way you actually referenced the G1 reason for the war starting. Flight Mods and it goes down hill from there. Your Characterization throughout the piece was great. The small details of their actions really helped to flesh out the mental picture for the scene.
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posted by [identity profile] stunt-muppet.livejournal.com at 04:17am on 20/12/2010
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked the small details of the actions - I'm never sure how to write those without cluttering up the fic or being too blatant about what they're supposed to signify. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!
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