stunt_muppet

As I mentioned last journal, Horatio and Marisol have never had a conversation that didn't involve angst. And I'm still double-checking to see if Horatio has ever laughed. (Only one example comes to mind, and even that wasn't a "that's funny" laugh. It was a "omg we're not dead" laugh.) This makes writing further chapters of The Sixth-Date Rule increasingly tricky, because how do you write small talk between two people who have never had any? 

Which makes me even more determined to finish it and perfect it. I'm stubborn that way. 

Without too much further ado, I present you with Horatio's section of the second chapter of The Sixth-Date Rule. (aka Part 1 of Part 2. Haha.) Marisol's section is in progress and will come soon. As always, concrit is loved, especially since I'm not sure I got anything right here. 

Still dithering over whether or not to restart my old ff.net account.

*grumbles*

[EDIT] Fixed a bit of the dialogue. Thanks to rainbowstevie for catching that.






Thoughts?

[EDIT] Part 1 is in pieces; you can find it here and here. (Read the first one first.)